Wednesday, May 5, 2010

Gentle Giant - Tre - Part 3

The Gentle Giant Once upon a time there was a Gentle Giant living on a nice warmworm white cloudander a house.it tase like cokey and crem ice crem and spakaels like the moon lhatein a house. He was nice and had lots of smarmt little friends. The Gentle Giant looks like a big hayoumen with nice shiney beran hiar.he has got a big green spakeley shot it is as green as the shiney geras.and he has shiney blue pans . The Gentle Giant had built a big sandpit and had lots of trucks and diggers to play with, in it. When his friends came to play they would play in the sandpit and make lots of things.His house is a big castie with sun flawers curvy stiks and nice dafatels. The children’s parents liked the Gentle Giant but got angry when everyone played in the sandpit because it would rain sand all over their houses and gardens below. Mums got grumpy because their floors were always sandy and when it rained it would get messy. The people who liked gardening got mad because the leaves on the plants would break and they wouldn’t grow. The clothes always had sand through themm when they were hanging on the washing line.The Gentle Giant got sad because the children were told not to play in the sandpit when they went and played with theGentle Giant. He liked playing inside the house but he liked it better outside in the sunshine. He needed to work out how to fix the problem becose he wanted to play with hes friendse .

2 comments:

  1. that is an awesome story tre!
    i think your very creative. but you need to work on your spelling.
    i loved your story!!!!!

    dad

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  2. I think that its cool that the house tastes like cookies and cream icecream.
    I agree with Dad in that you should work on your spelling.
    But I am very proud of your creativity and story telling. I am very very impressed and cant wait to show it to my friends

    love Mum

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