Tuesday, November 2, 2010

Teeth

If I do not clean my teeth
my blood sucking fangs will disappear.

If I don't clean my teeth
my bite will not get any blood.

If I do not clean my teeth
My teeth are 40,000 years old.

If I don't clean my teeth
I will have to go to the dentist
and get them burnt by the dentist dragon.

By Izaac.

teeth by Makayla

If I don’t clean my teeth my teeth will go all rotten, stinky and yellow with plaque on them .All gÅ«ngy green and furry.
If I don’t clean my teeth will be all jagged, cracked and snapped.
My teeth are 60 years old they have been like that for the last 60 years .I have dot got a toothbrush.
When I got to the dentist I lay on the dentist chair, they start the drill and rip my teeth out .I have got false teeth now.

the beach by Brooklyn

The sand shines and sparkles
And nobody says no
To splashing in cool
Summer sea
The sun shines on the rock pools
People laying out their towels
People slopping sunblock on
Children building sandcastles
Sand sculptures of dolphins, dogs, birds and cats
The next day the sand lays flat
The waves bubbling as the tide rolls in
I love the beach.

teeth by Adrianna



If I don’t clean my teeth
They will become rotten and fall out.
My teeth will look dirty

If I don’t clean my teeth
They will break
Become jagged and sharp

If I don’t clean my teeth
They will not last
For very long

If I don’t clean my teeth
The dentist will pull my teeth out.

So I’m ALWAYS going to clean my TEETH!


Wednesday, May 12, 2010

gentlegiant - Zavier



The Gentle Giant
Once upon a time there live a kind Gentle Giant living on a rainbow ronudcloud in a house. He was nice and had lots of cute little friends.

The kind Gentle Giant had built a big sandpit and had lots of little trucks and diggers to play with, in it. When his friends came to play they would play in the big sandpit and make lots of big things.
The children’s parents liked the Gentle Giant but got angry when everyone played in the sandpit because it would rain sand all over their houses and gardens below. Mums got grumpy because their floors were always sandy and when it rained it would get messy. The people who liked gardening got mad because the leaves on the plants would break and they wouldn’t grow. The clothes always had sand through them when they were hanging on the washing line.
The Gentle Giant got sad because the children were told not to play in the sandpit when they went and played with the Gentle Giant. He liked playing inside the house but he liked it better outside in the sunshine. He needed to work out how to fix the problem.